Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead
You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses
Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses
You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son
U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1
You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper
The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever
This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing
Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning
This is some gd writing while staying strong wit wp you successfully accomplished. That diction airy bar was nasty. Pretty much well written verse all the way through utilizing a lot of different techniques. You have a few elements to your setup/ punches which allows you to take different directions on how you want to execute. Nice.
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We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief
You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me
Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude
Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew
That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way
Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay
Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take
Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate
The run by him was coo, but came off a bit simplistic. I like the bar, but I didn't love it. This was a dope verse as well but had a couple wtf moments. You have a lot of sex bars lol. Some were funny, but others make me wonder what you're into irl. No judgement.
I feel D adds different levels while staying aggressive in his style. Its actually intriguing to read. Aero has humor which also a quality I like but just felt dominate had the better 2 if I had to pick one.
Great read guys but
Vote- dominate
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