Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead
(Heard similar concept - a scantron fill something with led scheme - so this didn’t feel the freshest. Executed well though)
You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses
Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses
(I like this. You weaved two solid personal angles together well)
You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son
U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1
(I think the D composed, the carrion, and dead meat flips would have been just okay by themselves. When you put them together, it’s a solid scheme though. This wasn’t heavy but it’s pretty good. I like the personal dig too)
Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand
I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag
(Spring collection/dress like a fag works but it’s not the cleanest flip. The Spring Collection phrase also seems a little awkward for the making him pay meaning. Overall this was decent. Execution kept it from being a miss)
15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines
If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside
(The trail blazer flip was light imo. I didn’t care for this line)
You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper
The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever
(Good. The wp was slick af. Tied it back into the punch pretty well)
But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch
She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has
(Lol thought this wordplay was slick too. Solid wording here. Pretty good)
I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing
You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings
(This works but I thought the safe space flip was kinda basic. This one is just okay)
This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing
Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning
(Son...this is nasty. The set up damn near perfect - “no purpose in breathing” sets up both the throat shot part and the searching for meaning part. Diction airy was dope to me. Yeah I fuck with this)
Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious
This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes
(I’m missing the punch/wp here. I’m not getting the pushing you off it part)
When you're out of town phone sexing your wife
We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief
You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me
(Lol the flip was light but the humor is there. I think this one is decent)
She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy
Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee
(This works but the association is kinda loose imo. Hard to explain but it’s like he came out his shoe and I guess he went down on bender knee but those not the phrases you think of when you think of the Zion shoe incident. Hope that explains it well, but pretty much it works but didnt feel like the cleanest flip)
Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude
Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew
(This is pretty good. I think his death or bday or something was recent so the reference feels fresh. Personal jab. I do like Dom’s carried you punch better but this one’s pretty good)
I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate
I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade
(Yep this is good too. The run by him flip is good)
Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya?
I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture
(Pause. Getting dominated by his mom is a very weird angle to take. The flip does work though. Set up coulda been better. Ay if this the route you wanna take in the battle, go ahead - the wording was fine. I guess this was solid)
That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way
Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay
(Lmfao pause but this funny af. Technically speaking, the last bar was better. This was funny though)
Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take
Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate
(This is nasty. Red beams over a body is nice in itself but ending it with The Golden Gate entendre is dope af)
Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two
My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude
(I think this was ambitious but wording wasn’t clean enough and it felt forced/stretched. You got Austin to Aust which feels reachin, then you got rail ya/railing which is kind of a stretch too. I like the ambition but this was gonna be a tough concept to make work)
Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy
He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?!
(I like that’s you staying true to your style. The the wp seem so corny and stretched that it kinda works in your favor. Adds to the humor or the whole bar. I thought this was light but it landed)
Ay this battle was fire. Dom’s dictionary and aero’s golden gate bars were disgusting. First time Ive read Dom before and was impressed. It’s always dope to see Aero make an appearance mix it up in the ring and he was dope here.
Battle was very close. It’s going to come down to a combination of preference and how you judge certain bars. I think Dom had a miss or two but overall had a very clean verse. All the wp came off smooth, creative concepts, personals, overall just a very well written verse. Aero came with a very consistent verse as well. Had some personal angles as well, creativity, and the humor is what sets aero apart from any other battler here.
This one’s close. I think aero had less misses but I think Dom had a very clean verse and a lot of very heavy punches. I got Dom narrowly edging this one.
Mvgt Dominate
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