When you're out of town phone sexing your wife
We're in the sheets, so STOP asking her do the sex toys give relief
You're trying to hear a toy story & she's thinking you've got a friend in me
Didnt like the intro "friends" part but this was good.
She been a freak, come on dukes the hoe strips & sucks for Hennessy
Think Zion, she's coming out her shoes and going down on bended knee
Cool current event line, worded good
Dom got emotional unable to write for tourny, I said I'll handle it dude
Bled his heart out, I carried an Aussie's deadweight like Irwin's camera crew
Lol..cool personal, I didnt particularly like the reference here as it's a bit too straight forward
I've had it with you & the constant shade, took no pointers from Dominate
I was great, the only thing I wanted to run by him was a katana blade
raw.. but a little too simple
Ya mom is fake, the way she feigns exhaustion did not at all warn ya?
I'm hitting the sack hun involves me in a harness for cock & ball torture
I liked this, I just read Blue line but it didnt take away from the concept to me
That was the kinkiest day, had me sexually terrified in the freakiest way
Way she put her finger in my stinker for play I was like uhohhh thinking I'm gay
Didnt care for this one
Let it ring in your face, laser scopes angelize so ponder the road you take
Once you see the red beams over a body you're closer to the Golden Gate
i think ive seen this but I dont recall where offhand, this was cool & setup well
Beat you 3 times, know your fate, there's no comparing the two
My name's Austin you're from Australia that means I'm railing you dude
straight
Dom was mad at me, asked if I sent his niece dick pics I said it's a big fallacy
He looked relieved. Showed him my phone like no I mean it's a big Phallus, see?!
was ok, feels a bit corny tho.
VS
Rollin on em & the 4s are prepped. Body shots – he gettin torn to shreds
No questionnaire getting finished… motherfucker I’ll fill ya form w/ lead
I've seen this the past season, I think Schade did it. But you had no way of knowing...this hit. Solid opener
You talk success w/ penny stocks. That’s some shit a fag rehearses
Fuck any holding ya own. You shoulda done that when u wrote for our tag team verses
good personal, tied to two things pretty well.
You were WORTHLESS in that, so quit claimin the outcome “ours” son
U got by on what D composed - without me carrion ur ass u were dead meat in round 1
Individually the wordplays are played but the tieins helped here imo
Now what?! You better pay me… Or I’m comin for you w/ 9s in hand
I ain’t triflin man - I’ll Spring Collection on u while u check the latest ways to dress like a fag
This was fresh. Good meta tie in and humor in the line was done well
15+ years of text, you pioneered nothin but awkward & clumsy lines
If Aer considered a trailblazer? It’s to go w/ the sweatervest he wear on walks in the countryside
Hmm it's ok...clever but not really hardhitting or funny to me...but it wasnt bad at all. It is still a creative take on a 'trailblazer' compound word.
You ugly guy. & any girl you tried flirting with was REPULSED. You fuckin leper
The second you cauterize she wanted to burn them shut forever
'Cauterize' wp feels old to me and the flip wasnt anything fresh enough to give it a pass for me tbh
But if a girl’s a 10? I’m beddin fast. Gets loud af when I wet her snatch
She start ridin & ‘groan on me overtime’… - that’s somethin your style NEVER has
Wording is good here, setup helped this as well but I just didnt feel this as a personal or wp as much
I got a HUGE spot to keep jewels locked. My work is worth concealing
You got a safe space too - alone in ur bedroom where no-one can hurt ur feelings
Cool. I had a safe space bar years back but this was a good flip & hit
This virgin’s reeling. I’ll let the toast pop til he sees no purpose in breathing
Throat shot! Get his diction airy… & leave him searching for meaning
This was creative...not sure saying his diction airy means anything but I know it's just the wp for the searching for meaning part. Points for creativity
Finish this rivalry once & for all. You’re weak, I’m beastin & vicious
This is the end of a warfare… I’m pushing you off it to sleep w/ the fishes
Solid wordplay. Wharf Aer was good to me
Tough call. I liked Aeros humor & crispness in execution and I liked Doms wordplay & personals. BOTH had high hits, equally as good wording & executing their concepts well. I think though Dom was a bit more versatile here. I enjoyed his read a bit better tbh. A couple of Aeros lines that werent heavy like the "Uhoh line' and Katana Blade were written well but felt a bit dry in terms of a good punch. Not to say Dom didnt have a couple passable wordplays. Aero had that opener, Austin & Hit Sack. Dom started solid, cooled a bit in the middle *& finished solid again. I can see how this can be close depending on preference. I think Dominate resonated w/ me more though. Good battle BOTW probably.
vote - Dominate
Last edited by Saint; 03-03-2019 at 11:44 AM.
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