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Old 03-02-2019, 04:53 AM   #8
Shia Labruh
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I don’t have to let the K blam. I’ll put the guns down if you want the fade, fam/
I got great hands...I’ll start punching without the arms - I’m Ray Man/
This heater wet shit. He better leave when TECs spit/
Or get stretched out...I’ll put a body on the handle like a bmx trick
Tryna box it out? That’s stupid bruh. I DON’T fight fair - this dude is fucked/
Razor tucked! This nigga in the wrong place askin for the fade...end up wit Supercuts

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pistol whip his bitch too. he can't stop me, she’ll feel her brain expire
i’ll blow through Black & Decker w/ the Tool... no refund or exchange required

Ok. So 2 of blue bayou lines could've been quoted but slytherin one the set up was written weird. The quoted part of it. & the chicken wing I almost quoted but it didn't rhyme. I'm guessing Canadian accent judging by bar black wrote? Maybe it's just me but the bars came across choppy, yet u can see what you were going for & it carries clever moments. Idk. Maybe it's just me.
Black rayman line was sick. As well as the bmx bar. He comes across, short. simple. Aggression. Energy.

This boils down to what u like to read preference. & I had more fun & wow moments reading Jabari Black verse tbh. Blue was likely better written but the pause & read again kept fucking up any rhythm I was trying to get wit his verse.
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