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Old 02-28-2019, 11:39 PM   #6
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Killed many like you that stretch out the bars, watch this faggot reach farther
I've only seen Cy clones doin' damage on a Japanese Harbor
Cool np. Feel like it could've been turned into a stronger punch with a different flip but not bad
Claim ya rap's Well Done, too? Getcha block killed for bein' awful rhymers
I'll put a hit out on Rax's City like a song from Tyga
Should just be Rax city to get the wordplay right. Not bad.
Dude's the type to drug a girl's drink... Then get pushed to the floor
Bitches ain't care for Cy's Mick Shots, and that's got 'em shook to his core
Cool. People will call it forced because of where the emphasis is but I don't mind it
I get ya girl's head for free, you gotta pay for the brains like she the best tutor
And that fact's really known to Torture Rax like Lex Luger
Not bad. Wp's pretty simple and the punch is just OK, so it didn't have a lot of impact
Real shit: him claimin' he's mackin' some bitches is actually fiction
If he claims a woman spies Rax? They best get they ass back in the kitchen
Nah. Forced phonetically and also because "a woman doesn't spy him" is a weird way to say he doesn't mack bitches.
Boy'll pay at the pump once I drop this wack fuck
Y'all bout to see Cy finna' tank since it's clear y'all got 'em gassed up
Nice. Could've been a little smoother worded I think but it's perfectly adequate to get the gameplay and punch across, which were both quite good. My favourite bar from you.




u haven't fucked a bitch in a decade..or likely 20..yu ain't piping many
got Prohibition about not getting ass.. niggas pussy rates been drier than the 1920's
Not bad. A bit simple.
ur 2 faced..i got 6 in the clip n 1 in the cham.. yur goin to fucking heaven
i can see in yur Snake Eyes ..if yu roll the dice wit me yu'll catch a lucky 7
OK, not bad
do a drive by on yah parents.. then shots murking yah wife
i'll get real Lowpro & spray at ya kids till it thins out yur whole circle of life
This had more potential than it delivered. The wording wasn't clean IMO
im splittin this orphan... fist r viscous & scourching my precision historic
idgaf where yu Gopro after hooks trash yur eye lens & yur vision's distorted
Cool. Swaggy. Check your spelling though. 'Viscous' fists is a funny image
i trash ops & blast hawks but everyone on earth wanna leave this fag drop
yu the biggest bitch on this Surface Pro & 1 jab'll fold u worst than a laptop
Pretty good. Like that you worked in the 'everyone on earth' connection in the set up.
ur girl rides me cause she hates this fuck n lets me slay the butt
Prolactin in the biggest area n nigga couldnt release anything to stimulate the slut
Cool nameplay idea. The flip was okayyyy.


Pretty close on concepts. I'm gonna go with Pro for slightly better wording and having the lotb (Cy finna tank). Could go either way. Thanks for showing fellas, keep writing.

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