[sral]

I’d nitpick over using damn twice in the first four end rhymes, but that’s just me being a perfectionist no good asshole that would never rhyme that tbh lol

I ain’t hating though, this was good

Beginning was better to me than the latter half of it preference wise but I don’t like judging stuff for tracks like I would text pieces, the two are different beasts to me and I write nothing like I would in text for actual songs lol

Record it bruh