Sinacog: Definitely one of your better verses. There were a few things I liked. Dating website and mr. Rodgers were decent. You use a lot of biblical references and occasionally repeat concept themes. Be more diverse. Keep elevating.
Shia LaBruh: You have the mechanics down. There were a few older ideas I wasn’t really a fan of. Tommy treatment, Soulja boy, plank were my favs. Sharpen up the wording would be my one critique. Not a bad drop.
Overall: Shia LaBruh wins. He had the stronger concepts.
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