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Old 06-10-2013, 06:46 AM   #8
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Patrown's underwrite makes it difficult to judge unbiasedly. Deadman's content was much more fleshed out and had interesting underlying themes present. While Patrowns last line was quite poetic "life's melancholy lyrics are wrote with one hand, sweeping away tracks God leaves in the sand" it felt too focused on being stylistic and not substantive enough. Voted for Deadman.
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