[Zaddy]

i'd neva be homies w/ a bittin pussy, u'll see a uzi spark eight
we ain't Chums faggot u just rip off concepts & bite'em like it's shark bait
never knew chum was a synonym for close friend lol had to look it up. This was a good line
jump u w/ the crew nonstop, switchin ppl till ur hurt more
those stomps'll Fade-In till this faggots face blends into the earths core
mmm wasn’t feein this one
ur 2-2 rec's laughble as fuck, i'll put a blade in ya side
ur ranks Disappearing Inc cuz everythin u write fades away in our minds
alright, not a bad inc flip
ur moms a gang bang veteran & she says her head screwed
i got it w/ Eavesdrop my dick in her mouth till u can hear her choke from ur bedroom
lol ok, fresh wordplay I can dig
& this pussy neva gets bitches, i got sluts w/ naughty minds
if u hear Indica ho down it's a blow up doll he smashes til he gets body highs
damn that wordplay was tough but the blow up doll part made it kind of corny for me, overall it’s still creative and works for what it is



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Think he a Lyon in this empire, listen squire just retire
We seen your tricks before in chiraq but daddy's fgt son is just a liar
ahh this is a fresh concept that I was hoping to see this week. Had mad potential with it here but you needed more tie ins to make it really connect. This is decent at best as is
My plug like the outlet but best believe that surcharge ain't cheap
Your plugs all over your whole body he'll be left in the hospital for weeks
my imagination led me to believe this was super dope until I read it a few times and realized it doesn’t make a lick of sense and is worded like hell
Shotty resembles a strip of land mines send this dork flyin
When you really break him down his reach is setting records on sports science
this is actually pretty good lol
I literally have 5k in savings bitch, this fkn dude Knight not fiscal
Let him know when I pull up.... that light goes off, is not ur Blind spot signal
ok not bad
"F u! I'm glad your dead!" That's what the card on the flowers read
Cuz when I see ur bread, Its shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head
lmao yoooo “shootin all kind of crazy ways like a broken shower head”. That’s fire bro. Only problem is “when I see your bread” brought it from a solid 9 to a firm 6.


Hey incredible you’re getting better each week man, if this weeks verse is a glimpse of a new style you’re testing out, I like it a lot. Work on wording and better tie ins though. But as far as concepts, you got that down pact. AK you had a solid verse, very consistent and some examples of how wordplay should be done. Props to both but AK outshined incredible here.


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