Tell this junkie he isn't clever, give u a dose of reality u haven’t seen in forever
The way he’s gettin tortured by a pig.. they’ll need jigsaw to put the pieces together
cool concept, nice start
You think u hard now? Calm down. step off the stage - ur gettin tossed out
I’ll have the steel in ur face w two blades on ya back.. let’s see if u Kabal now
fire... like the way this was worded
I got a pump for u & ya thot. U won’t know what to do when it pop
Either ur gettin cooked by the heat.. or I’m raisin on ur girl like a Sunmaid box
nahh.. flipping the outdated raisin/raising wordplay into a loosely connected gunbar is mehh to me.. didnt like this one
Is u a dummy? U stole Jabs swag n thought it was on the money
Soon as we saw u Jack Black style we knew u were just actin’ funny
nah, not only do i think this personal is forced...the idea's been done for "black" nameplays for a long time.. Body had a coolish one because he elevated it with the Jumaji play.. as is this was played and basic
You dickridin’ vets r the worst. He’ll put on the jets wen the fire burst
First I’ll aim it at ya back, then im leavin’ a 40 in the disc like a Bayou verse
haha, good site punch.. this was nice
So this is your hero? Tell ol’ Dudley do right I’m slidin on his bitch fast
It’ll be the long nose.. holdin ur girl hostage on the metal like Snidely Whiplash
had to look up.. creativity points here, meta is straight
If y’all thought he was poppin shit.. u’ll change ur mind wen I put a stop to it
soon as you try releasing a Dummy, Boy you’re endin’ up in prison like Tekashi did
pretty decent, the concept is cool but the punch that ur gunna put him in jail is weak imo, especially for a closer
He bit tsu surf lines, I see u browsin.. other rhymes is what he be downin..
Z be scroungin.. his verses have that meltdown and cop look that can rival the t1000
idea is fiiire, but the "and" for whatever reason really takes away the impact for me.. love the idea but feel this couldve been cleaned up
Listen here Clefanie I’m seriously sick of your shit thinkin ur bitten disses will hit..
what u spittin aint lit, lookin like u came straight outta 8 mile with that lip as lickety split.
lol @ Clefanie.. funny swag bar
You aint standing tall. Think evolution as the revolver spray and i land it allll..
this man’ll crawl.. so when u see the Cro Mag rise it’ll be the end of this neandrethal.
okay flip.. seen the idea taken on before tho.. dece
Res is gon give YOU the business, leave u bruised cuz this 1-2 is rude & vicious..
im leavin dude in stitches.. sock you into next week like you were really fuckinn superstitious.
lol dope.. nice fresh concept here
ur a nerd that’s wack.. so while u say u grippn steel we kno u aint hurlin macs..
it’s a disturbing fact.. ur just a clown out of cannons & we all can see the circus act.
pretty good for a you dont shoot guns concept.. personally havent seen the clown getting shot out of a cannon/circus trick idea before.. thought this was cool
Get popped and shamed, ya whole block of lames are gettin rocked & maimed..
shotgun to the chest.. see ya ticker sweep across the room like we were at the stock exchange.
fiire. dope concept
yes i’m THAT dude, ur a fuckin twat.. whoever said u the man just lied bitch..
i’m a baaaaad MF.. your a bad M/F too cuz u dont know what gender u want to identify with.
ehh, creative & a fresh concept... personally i just dont dig the M/F angle here and think its a reach.. like the thought process tho
Overall this was a good battle.. Zelph's verse was cool & pretty consistent, Kabal and Bayou verse disc punches were great gun bars.. only a couple mehh bars imo, but they cost him & I've got Resin edging this
on the whole, the ticker/stock exchange was lotb to me, and his highs were better.. i like how he took diff angles a little better then a strictly attack line/gun bar champ match verse.. but maybe that's just me.. props to both
Vote - Resin
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