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Old 02-15-2019, 08:24 PM   #9
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JB:

The lead clap! Kill his whole team when the pole squeezing/
Soon as I grab the nose im tiltin heads back...til everybody he nose bleedin/
lol this was good conceptually but the knows/nose thing was corny
I know ya type. Swayin in the PMs when the voting’s tied. For that you getting forced to die/
When I’m sendin shells think Clinton emails...politicking in private gon get you smoked by the 45/
I get it but it was too loosey goosey. needed to be stronger. No one calls Trump the 45 and so this needed more effective wording
Let me guess, a bunch of Black flips? Not smart enough to come with better shit?/
Well think Bay of Pigs...cus now I’m fucking Infiltration up for his lack of intelligence/
This was cool
The heater smokin. A headshot’ll leave ya facial features open/
Niggas won’t even realize it’s Inf...that’s Saitaima voting/
LOL
Lead pop! I’ll do this dude mean. Inf on it - use the new beam/
Headshot! The 5’ll take the face off a fraud like the Scooby Doo team/
aight.. kinda old conceptually though. any Scooby Doo line is played
I gotta bad bad bitch that’ll load a TEC though. Wifey material, but let the 40 wet folk/
So even the shots that ‘my broadcast’ll catch a cheater slippin’ like Joey Greco/
not a chance.
I’m putting fear in ya! I’ll pay mommy a visit to fuck up the site of her burial/
I’ll dig her up n dump the coffin...empty the whole box like it’s a toy in the cereal/
aight, you'd really dig up a coffin just to dump a body out though?
U tried to drink ya depression away. You’ll have bigger issues when the straps flyin/
A spine shot’ll slip a disc. You had a drinking problem? Well this 40’ll have ya back slidiln’/
okay


Inf:

Cashius dividing blacks/whites needlessly brought us apart..
'His RaceBaiting Drops were Spinning ur Wheels' like hittin ¿ boxes in Mario Kart
creative for sure. worded well. wasn't so effective but the creativity here is undeniable. good start
Don't call it hate crime when I curbstomp JB & bury his head in..
Blackface be alll over my shoes they'll get pulled along w/ Katy Perry's Collection
LOL
I control space in this hoe's face, w/ punches the kid is garbage
This league Jab went the Distance & we seen he's 'Short, 1 Off' when missin targets
i dont completely get it so I dont like it
Got sticks, cans or poles now? Voters go 'oh woww@ them fo' pounds
Naturally Gassed Lines built up ur ego & I cant Dig em based on THOSE grounds
reach
I'd shoot right in ur face for flippin trash til no horizon remains..
It's time, a place, to make Supermassive BlackHoles so nothin 'Light can Escape'
this was light. I liked massive black holes but this needed to be a stronger punch and not just creative
Dude's a sweet lil cuck, stab his girls chest while J's eatin the slut
It's like the new Reese's because how I put 2 together by leavin Pieces in Cups
so he's eating his girl out while you stab her in the chest ok.. didnt like the punchline either
Goons run in ya house, gun in ur mouth. I hired contract killers..
Put it all on the table w/ a band to light up ya top-roof like a Romantic Dinner
top-roof threw it off for me a little bit. this was creative even though mouth-roof is played but the top roof I can't get with. top-roof makes it work on the imagery side of the dinner but I cant let you get away with top-roof
An that smack style's gotta end dog. you've imitated the trend wrong
If 'Out is opposite to In?'...It's fitting I give your repackaged shit the proper send off
Dry


After reading Inf's first couple bars I thought this was going to be easy to vote on Inf is on fire. Then the rest he tried too hard to be creative. Inf, my suggestion is don't always overthink the bars. You only need a couple good ones then hit us with jabs. JB not your best showing here but I'm a fan of your work.


Even though I said Inf shouldn't try to be overcreative I think his lines were buoyed by the creativity whereas JB's misses were basic.

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