Cynical: Definitely enjoyed the Watchmen and Kazooie lines. Felt "fuckin Existence" didn't really work that well, kinda broke up the flow a bit, concept was cool tho. Funny shit with the electricians union and the K-pop hits line was dope. Never watched Jimmy Neutron or know what it is other than remembering the intro so it might have went over my head, I understand what you're getting at tho so it's still cool to me.
Flow: Dope opener to start it off. Cool attempt with the nameplay, think it could have been executed better tho but +1 for creativity. Not quite getting the Rash line, I might be out of touch if it's something that happened on the forums or I'm just being stupid, it is what it is tho. Similar thing with the next one, not quite sure what you're getting at tbh, if you actually mean Arsenal as the team it'd be dope to have the capital letter on Arsenal to make it a bit more obvious but it would make sense so I'm sticking to it and give you the benefit of the doubt. Laughed at the closer.
Thought Cynical seemed to be a bit more consistent overall so my vote goes to him, he edges it in favor for my vote on this one. Cool battle, enjoyed both reads.
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