I thought both verses were pretty dope. Lots of creativity, humor, punches etc. This isn't my realm at all so I might be very off with my vote but I got Body edging it.
Even tho I understand why Zunto went for penis pics instead of dick pics the line sounded a bit weird to me, beside of that it was fire.
Felt a bit uneasy about the white eyes on you line, might have just been me being a cringy white boy and overthinking "is he going over the edge or not?" Thought the following couplet was cool tho as it didn't seem as generic to me with the "go back to Africa"-bit if I should leave out the uneasiness. Enjoyed the flow throughout, overall a great verse I smiled here and there at, ok closure and a couple heavy hitters. 7.5/10
In terms of Body I definitely enjoyed the gaming references and the way they were set up (fuck those dogs tho), set ups and flow. Didn't stumble upon any lines I questioned as much and I guess that is what determined it for me as overall it's pretty close and I definitely enjoyed reading what you guys came up with. Good shit.
Vote BodySnatcher.
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