The writing in and of itself was pretty great. I wasn't fond of the topic tho or at least the theme you chose to go with. In comparisons to how creative you usually spin the topic/picture this was relatively baseline at best. No offense. But I think you'll agree. With that said...
Quote:
I’ve been happier since travelling without the baggage you bring,
free from the grasp of your fingers pulling me back by the string.
I’m expanding my wings, planning new things and soaring the heights
better to adjust the course of my flight than to live caught in a lie.
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I thought that was pretty stellar.