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Old 02-03-2019, 11:02 PM   #9
Sinacog
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aim at ur top - target's in the clear so my team's takin the shot..
shout once this cold set-in cuz we'll spray on the spot & need blood stains to be washed

This is a cool bar here..had gunplay essentials..but needed some wordplay..but it's good enough as a swift jab..

that's creative gunplay. while you're known as a boring punch writer..
cred's arnold in predator - cuz he say shit like keep'a 'stick around' for corny one-liners

I don't really know about this one..could be better in ways..needs more effeciency


made ur chick slave to dick, i squeezed between knees w/ a stern mount
she told me 'open my thigh, master.' i was in & out faster than the low body workout

Lmao..this was okay..needs wilder exquisition..but this was okay..



'lemme talk my shit' 'zip em up' <- ya copy URL & botch them quotes..
i'd tell smack for evry stolen 'slogan-sue' then take my time draggin 1 across ur throat

Lmao..this was cool..had all the essentials here..I could dig this..

dog i gotta ankle holstered piece that's hid under my pants cuff..
i'll 'draw from the bottoms' for paper like the barrel sharp picked from for my matchup

The wording was cool here..nice one man..your finest bar here..

this a onesided battle, only thing worse is the mod noone reads..
'In/cred's' a bad look like if faggot runned the league or kids faces when he won custody..

this needed better wording..but for what it was..it was cool..but needs something more..

overall - this was a cool verse..not your best..but it was cool in a way..had cred showed it would've been dope here..nice one man..
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