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Old 02-02-2019, 12:05 PM   #8
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V acidic to sin and a cynic, bruh I swing hard and leave your knees Bowed like Riddick.
I bring regard, and I’m a critic, so I shit in your yard, then put the straps to your head like Riddick.

Ok I see what you did here and this was fiya to me! Had to read like 3 times! Good shit V

Just repeated Riddick in end rhymes, that’s almost as bad as a barcotic wordplay; I know, it’s a sin…ick.
repeat sin and repeat, because I come twice, like in your chick’s shit, ask my dick’s tip,

Ehh, not really feeling this one

that’s a slick flip of a dim trick’s split slit, no heart when I shoot and make ya Gam-Gam’s stint rip
I been sick. Don’t sleep or slip, two left limp, from getting screwed tighter than your vehicle’s VIN strip.

This is ok

ain’t seeing V like the last line of a vision test, leave your concepts more fulla shit than a pigeon nest
I display success, leave ya chest heavy like a weighted vest when I shoot out ya lungs with bated breath

Nahhh bro

My every punch is hard and unique, so you’ve no chance of winning, just left in the dirt like a garden gnome’s prison
Ninja, so you won't see this beef like Boof’s kitchen, blade leave you like Hogan’s haircut, with the whole of your dome missing

Not really feeling this


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dont front. everyone here knows how fuckin gay you are
when I say this fag Trans its a no-brainer like you aint got a car

Lol, I guess this is coo

I'ma fuck up your clique up on some 'my mouse dont work' shyt
yall be seeing so many beams you think it's last week's verses

Nahhhh b

fr you a garbage writer. worst part is you try your best
verses aint just taxing to read. they occupyin a branch of the IRS

What this could have been!

bless, I'm done. don't need a whole verse to kill ya
fuck a dead man walking. I'm starin at the dance from Thriller

All thriller lines are dead to me! Lol

I'm ILLER. murderous n you deserve the shit. the god's a killer
these kids wanna see me work with the tool. bitch I'm Bob the builder

Bob the builder lines? Nahhh bro


So yeah this was a light read!, I got V here overall way more consistent. Cynic you got to get your setups and execution up to par. Its all G tho props to both here!

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