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Headboard was cool but think you could of polished it s bit better. That's the spirit was top notch. Barehead was solid. Zelph line was a miss for me. The sports reference was over my head (I'm guessing it's a American football thing) gun butt was at least a new angle on a played concept. Wasn't keen mind. Opener was my fav. Well worded and fresh idea.

Overall solid showing Blue. Two misses, one of which is my lack of knowledge, the other tbh is just because I've spent my own recent time insulting the poor dude for similar angles so lost its edge. Oh did I mention the closer. That was a clever idea. I didn't like the end rhyme but presume it works with your accent. But yeah that was dope.


Nice shit man