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Old 01-31-2019, 11:16 PM   #25
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Opener was coo. Cred's circle the block bar was better. Keeping it 100, on that Chinese shit, I'm not a fan of that many quotes in a bar. One, maybe two, okay, but that many makes it clunky to me. On top of that, if you need your reader to understand a centuries old Chinese torture to be able to fully understand your bar, that's on you. Here's the idioms you're up against:



At least make it clear what I should Google by making that the emphasis. No one could quote the bar because it trips over itself before really landing
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