I thought this was a good read, English.
Your general over-view on things is quite stylish; - you have good rhythm, and rhyme scheme to control your language. Language was pretty nice, you have philsophical under-tones that could be advanced upon have you read more books or something; - but this was nice with it. You could really shine if you up your vocabulary in places, and shine with more colorful language - but this was nice. I do like the topic you choose to ride with; - was decent in it's merit. Ending was cool in it's way..nice job man..keep writing...lol...
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