I thought this was a good read, Baron Mynd.
This was really good, man. I enjoyed this very much; - had all the essentials for a good written topical piece. Your imagery was done really well; - and your multi-syllabic rhyme schemes and flow were good as-well. I don't really see anything wrong with this. It had a good reason behind this. It reminded me of the scene in finding nemo that was like this scene in the written...lol..but this was good man..niice work...keep writing...
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