Hello, ILL Scripturez..I thought this was a decently dope read..nice work..
Overall - Good work..I enjoyed the nice use of imagery and rhyme scheme you held here. The rhyme scheme had each imageric scene bouncing to the next scene. Was quite good. I enjoyed this piece quite a bit. Was nice with it in ways. I enjoyed a lot of the lines here..held good imagery and good base. The Adam's apple and bible passage line was dope...nice one. Good writing here. Keep writing!
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