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Sinacog · 01-30-2019, 03:07 PM

@SELF Activate

Hello, Self Activate...lol..allow me to feed this piece of work.

I enjoyed this read Self Activate - had all the essentials for a good written. You had nice mechanics, with a good flow to boot. Decent imagery, with a good narrative. I enjoyed the story-line; - was quite entertaining in a way. Nice work, man. The ending with the character or narration being from a employee was kind of..just there..like..whatever..lol...but it was still good in a way. I enjoyed this written. The ending was pretty good as-well. Nothing too bad to say. Decent work, man. Keep writing!

01-30-2019, 03:07 PM	#2
Sinacog R.Killsbury 3000 Join Date: Dec 2018 Posts: 2,299 Battle Record: 4-25 Rep Power: 8129215	@SELF Activate Hello, Self Activate...lol..allow me to feed this piece of work. I enjoyed this read Self Activate - had all the essentials for a good written. You had nice mechanics, with a good flow to boot. Decent imagery, with a good narrative. I enjoyed the story-line; - was quite entertaining in a way. Nice work, man. The ending with the character or narration being from a employee was kind of..just there..like..whatever..lol...but it was still good in a way. I enjoyed this written. The ending was pretty good as-well. Nothing too bad to say. Decent work, man. Keep writing!