This was a decent read, Dead man.
I always enjoy your works, they're quite entertaining and fulfilling to me. You have quite a good way of crafting your craft to fulfillment - which I enjoy. You don't seem to stray from your topic; - as the topic is about you; - and you write about yourself quite well. I don't seem anything wrong with this piece. Seemed quite good. The 'self fulfilling prophecy' line was very good, so was the duplication. I enjoyed more of these lines, as-well as the imagery. I enjoyed this piece, as it was quite good. Some lines I felt should be thought of a second time perhaps? The 'voting for prophet' comes to mind - people don't usually vote for prophets. Prophets are sacred people; - chosen by the gods to complete tasks for the prosperity of people. You don't vote for prophets..lol..that's for something else..but this was quite good. I enjoyed this piece, and it's creativity; imagery; and symbolism to other things and to yourself. Good work, Dead Man. I'll read more of your work in the later time, good write..keep writing!
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