I'm a christian preacher, my sermon has voice - I'm sending you to hell with flames as a germ for the void
Let's play hide and seek with the pistol, my bursting has noise - If 'Objective A Bomb' we're playing Search and Destroy
This was a fiya opener imo here! Good shit
With the pistol, I'm blasting bars - I'm Sinacog, while you're 'acog in the wheel' with the fastest cars
I'll sun you, and you wouldn't be a gaseous star - and I'll 'choke the blue out of this man' to make him look like his avatar
Ehhh, Wording is so good here but the execution lacks/Avatar lines kinda played to me
When I blast the pistol, the slug will hit him - I'll show you what I have in store when I 'rob you on the streets' - it's none of your fucking business
This is a Big Pun all over again, I'll hit you with a drunken guinness! - I'll grab the pistol and ''give you two caps' that's a double fitted
This was nice actually, bro your rhyme pattern is golden
If you grab the pistol, I'll snitch on you capisce' - when I grab the pistol, this bitch will be deceased
Forget your birth, you're a glitch or a disease - when it comes to Objective, and he 'digs for personal' he's like a bitch of the police
This was ok here. Could have been better on the execution. "Bitch of the police" kinda corny
When I grab the pistols, it's like a college graduation - I'll leave you with caps, please! You could 'roll cocaine in weed leafs' you still wouldn't be a rap fiend!
Try to steal the show, and I'll snap thief - he's a topical head - so when he's venting, I'll 'air him out' till' he can't breathe
Nice
I'm a knight, and I'll slay this brook - you couldn't 'see the light' with David Cook
the Bible is my favorite book - but I'll grab the pistol, and 'POP you in the Hood' like fathers in poor neighborhoods
Haha creative here! Not a heavy hit, but this was a coo jab
I'll grab the pistol, and I'm out for blood to dump this thief in the crypt - you're a wack rapper - believe you are him
When I rap, I'm deceiving this kid - we don't care about your lines, we're like Ludacris
This was ehhh, not really feeling this here
saying 'Move bitch get out the way' like cheating spouses leaving the crib
My topicals are a rapping anthem, you're a peasant - while I'm Mickey Mouse casting magic
When you write, your raps are tragic - this scared pussy's going to no-show, you'll 'see this kid going ghost' faster than Danny Phantom
Danny Phantom lines are played as well to me! Cant score you for the hit here on the finisher!
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You're the average Hentai eccentric that's too easy to battle with,
ideas so bad vets couldn't climax your verses even if ten tackles it.
Nahhh bro, couldn't get with this here. Wordplay kinda off i believe
I hate illiterate jews rocking pedobear costumes at Comic-Con,
so put a face to your name and tell me where you draw logic from.
This was ok, light jab at most
It's a horror show to say the least, on Netcees you stay deceased,
no rape victim either; this faggot used his allowance to pay the priest.
Lmao, funny as fuck here
You manifested the wack-kin, it runs in your blood to part doubt,
don't listen to advice if someone tells you to write your heart out.
Nice here, wording was golden on this to me
Couldn't text worse with deaf/blind downs kids for the write up,
you call the cops for shit you didn't do just to get a good line up.
Light wording, but ok line here
Can't hide that cheap 90s vibe, you got nothing to sell here,
no one buys the style from The Fresh Prince of Welfare.
Lmao funny closer!
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This was a ok battle here, Sin had some cool lines but, i love gun bars seriously, but don't always entitle ya lines to "Grab the pistol". Sharpen up your concepts alittle bit too. Your wording is water though no lie. Fresh ass flow! Your bars alittle stretched also just need to tone them down a bit. Objective your style alittle bit more simple but effective. Need more aggression and direct angles at your opponent. Overall you both still need work but this a coo battle. I got Obj here just with better concepts and consistency. Plus he had bars that had me dying laughing also.
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