No need to write, gamble ya life, these punches fkn lethal,
Once the keys start ur gettin flamed quicker than Deniro in Casino.
Coo opener here! Nothing heavy, but was coo
This the nigga yall brought Ryno? Yeah ok pussy u better keep calm,
If he’s head & shoulders above me, i bet a stack it’ll end w/ a power bomb.
This was Fiyaaa! Like how you worded this and everything
Duke it out w/ ya bitch snatch, me & my team stay slayin’ her fam,
Think Zion Williamson, every week i hit her rim w/ a thunderous slam.
Ehh, this was ok, could have did a lil more
Come to my slums, that heroic & brave shit’ll get u bodied up, quick,
Every element around is dangerous, but homie this aint a spider man flick.
Couldn't to much get with this one
He's nervous w/ hoes, im raising the scope, the tools get violent,
Bullets r flyin! Pussy even ya date w/ death’ll end awkward in silence.
This was a ok closer here, think the wording could have been just slightly better, but light ender here. It was ok
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When I dump the pump...Rhino will wonder were his leg went...
Cuz I'ma leave more shots 'Around the Horn' than an ESPN segment,
I like this here, good open up here!
Ur a circus-freak. So if I'm 'twisting ur wrist' like an extortionist...
Stay calm before this thing on my 'shoulder pop' like a contortionist,
This was ok, not to heavy on the sting, coo tho
Body is strap like a harness, so when I bring out the darkness...
A pair of desert eagles will leave vultures feeding off Rhino's carcass,
Haha, I like how this was worded for some reason. Not heavy, but wasn't light either. Good jab
I'ma gangster & gentleman. I'll take ur bitch when I paint lead...
Cuz the way I 'grab the handle & open up' it's like chivalry ain't dead,
Me personally i heard a chivalry line cause i do watch battle rap heavy, but it was nothin like this one here and it was fiya in my opinion! Dope punch here!
When Rhino charges w/ 'Bolt-Action'...I'll keep the Lever draw...
1 shot & we'll see his insides 'wrap around the pole' like a tetherball.
This was coo closer here, heard a tetherball concept before, but the wording here was totally different again. Nice finish
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This here was a cool read, On Ryno part i feel like he came in stinging then faded out a couple bars here and there. His read was coo, but i def know he can come way better. Body had some stings out there in his bars and less misses then Ryno also. Nice shit to both, but i got Body taking this one here.
V-Body
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