Sin you know how to write, it's just a matter of accumulating your skills into punches. You always wanna expand on the concept. Kid going ghost is a good example, you could have flipped this a number of ways but used the most simple way to do it possible. That was a good base to build on, you know what ur doing. It doesn't happen overnight it's a slow morph. Keep writing.
Objective I honestly like reading topical guys' battle verses, they have a story like feel most of the time that u don't often get to see here. U obv are no rookie and know what it takes to put a verse together, good stuff stay signed in
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Originally Posted by takem2school
Me vs you only if that’s what it takes.
Battle to the death
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like a woolah what it do to one’s medulla oblongata- revenge of Montezuma on a blotter
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