This is a pretty dope piece, Genocide. Really no complaints, I believe the reason you think text is like this - you need to go on RR more - text is alive there. Here, it's okay though..used to be better I assume? lol..but this was pretty niice..good multi-syllabic rhyming..good structure..good rhyme schemes..I enjoy some of the one-liners..was dope and crisp..niice one man..glad to have you write something like this..niice one..keep it up..man..
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