out of all the pieces I've dropped feed on in the past few days, none come close as being story driven and laden with an identifiable atmosphere...almost a brooding one.
This reminds me of one of the Vet Shadow's pieces, laden with feminine antagonism.
While rhymes were not jaw dropping here or over the top, the written voice and commentary connects with the reader more, which in itself is a nice skill.
easy to read, thanks for sharing.
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