Loved the flow, nice internals, great use of vocab, syllable count was solid, all in all a very nice piece however the last few lines didn't have that polish the rest did an kind of felt forced and rushed an let the piece down slightly but looking past it this was a real sweet read
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Originally Posted by El Muffin
Jay Welsh took your lunch money
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Originally Posted by Jabari Black
Flow....that punch was disgusting. Mvgt Flow
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