This was a pretty good read, Self Activate.
There was nothing really wrong with this piece, had all the essentials; and good rhythm with nice narration of something grand and obtuse. Good multi-syllabic rhymes, and good narration of the topic at hand. Some parts were filler, that could be cut-out in a way; but overall this was really nice. Nothing really wrong here, you did a good job. Nice, one. Keep writing!
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