12-23-2018, 01:33 PM
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Everything's Connected
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Quote:
Originally Posted by DMS
Lip Splits
Ph’losphy from Thomas Aquinas locked in Asylum,
Taught with the rhymin’ n godless defiance.
Ransomed to lonesomeness, lost in the guidance,
Handsome and wholesome, yet awful n violent
(The problem’s inside him.)
-->I pictured that last line being whispered and it creeped me out lol. Love it.
Cage like a belt guitar string that plays you hellish harp piece,
The Sweet tart n jealous smarty chained to the Meltin’ car seat.
--->Damn.
The fetus in abortion meets the elitist swordsmen,
They compete for the leading role in theaters of Greek performers.
The coldest ledge, the best forever, the golden steps, the predecessor,
the loaded lead, the only bet,now no distress, the messy dresser.
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Solid all around. Enjoyed it.
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