'Moon. Luna. But first of all her name was Sin
An ancient dim. Still comeing with the force of ancient djinn. Oh no, he's why me'ing. Begging every sky genie to stop dementing mens mentis. Pen pendulums on everlasting mental Sun
Sinnnnnnce you want to talk to Self'
This is very good, in it's own light. I was very impressed with it, along with your other poetic language in this. This drop was quite impressive in it's poetic stance and allegory. You had a lot of verbiage, but didn't over-due verbosity at all; but it was in control with the fox and lore. A lot of stand-out lines, and good quips' for written work. Nice one, man. Keep writing.
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