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Old 12-17-2018, 04:59 PM   #10
King Karaoke
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Join Date: Mar 2013
Posts: 1,515
Battle Record: 61-20

Accomplishments
- 50 Wins

Champed
- Survivor Tournament
- Netcees Battle League (6x)
- Netcees Gimmick Tournament

Rep Power: 10353694
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Hi...

If I don’t swing on your ass, then my 9 milli will blast
It’s going to be hard to remember the future when I make you a thing of the past
No one wanted a sequel from you, the first one was pretty awful
When say we want our paper, back...we’re talking about a refund for that shitty novel
I’ll let off a couple of shots that’ll leave Demo dead
U talk tough and hide behind your computer, u only size up dudes in aero’s thread
You better chill. You’re unemployed and stalking dudes like it’s a clever skill
Yeah Fin works at a pizzeria but at least he’s rolling in more dough than you ever will
Boring as fuck, your podcast failed because your personality matches your voice
U keep losing job after job, your a stay at home dad but it wasn’t by choice
Whole family needs a diet yet you keep playing with your health
Even your wife's a fat slut, u wouldn’t have a Good Girl all over you if you were Zelph
He gives random guys his number. So it’s obvious this dude is lame
Congrats on being a Shrink. Now why don’t you help your fat ass wife do the same

This was pretty consistent. Pizzeria and aero line were the best lines. One or two lines i didnt get because of the reference.

Sent ur girl a text, right. She booked me on the next flight
I’ve got her pussy in the palm of my hand.. only thing u stroke is a fleshlight
Ur girl had a nice grip, damnnn that was a tight bitch
I turn her on, u turn her off, on, off.. it’s like we’re fighting over a light switch
i work hard to pay for my bud, bets and beers, that's how I flex life
my dollers made on blood, sweat and tears, aka how you pay the ex wife

Your verse kinda threw me off. The stuff I quoted was fire but the rest of the verse was worded pretty weird. It feels like 2 different people wrote it or like you got tired of writing it halfway through.

Good battle but I think the first verse was more consistent.

Vote- first guy...

Bye...
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