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Coup · 06-08-2013, 08:40 PM

Stand behind me Satan!

I was liking this, believing you were sincerely praising and offering up humble love to Elohim of the heavens...

That is until I read your last line of course. Make no mistake, you are baring a deceptive false light.

When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher.

Reference:

2 Corinthians 11:14
Revelations 12:9

And...

Isaiah 14:12-14

12How art thou fallen from heaven, O Lucifer, son of the morning! how art thou cut down to the ground, which didst weaken the nations!

13For thou hast said in thine heart, I will ascend into heaven, I will exalt my throne above the stars of Elohim: I will sit also upon the mount of the congregation, in the sides of the north:

14I will ascend above the heights of the clouds; I will be like the most High.

Consider this a critique.

Or your last line

When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher.

Can mean to praise even harder and worship more.

Hard to tell. Otherwise this is a well thought out piece and is subtle in its softness. Good drop.

06-08-2013, 08:40 PM	#7
Coup Don't believe the hype Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 572 Battle Record: 4-5 Rep Power: 0	Stand behind me Satan! I was liking this, believing you were sincerely praising and offering up humble love to Elohim of the heavens... That is until I read your last line of course. Make no mistake, you are baring a deceptive false light. When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher. Reference: 2 Corinthians 11:14 Revelations 12:9 And... Isaiah 14:12-14 12How art thou fallen from heaven, O Lucifer, son of the morning! how art thou cut down to the ground, which didst weaken the nations! 13For thou hast said in thine heart, I will ascend into heaven, I will exalt my throne above the stars of Elohim: I will sit also upon the mount of the congregation, in the sides of the north: 14I will ascend above the heights of the clouds; I will be like the most High. Consider this a critique. Or your last line When I get to Heaven I'll lift God Higher. Can mean to praise even harder and worship more. Hard to tell. Otherwise this is a well thought out piece and is subtle in its softness. Good drop. __________________ What is public must be legit, fit for average consumption, don't forget. What is private is handled by pirates, prying loose profits from prosthetics. To tell the difference between: first remain unseen with a steady breath and hope, then listen to the cracks in the wall with a stethoscope. Last edited by Coup; 06-08-2013 at 09:46 PM.