JEM-
Who'd outsmart me faggot? "You niggas couldnt make it to my class" - now "go get your tardy passes!" [/EZ.]
GOD he's wacker! So... I have still continued to "go H.A.M. on Melts" - without "craving a Arby's sandwich!"
^^^Best bar. I liked that is was a good punch and creative. Good stuff
Camp Bell-
why attempt to hurt me bruh, ya vicious flurry of fictitious wording sucks
you get bitches but kitten hoarding the only way he get the pussy snug
^^^This was your best bar here. Made me laugh.
Okay, overall I don't like battles that a required a lot of explanations involved. I understand your refereces, JEM, but your verse should written in the format that is understandable in laymens terms. You had the punches which edged this out for you. Camp Bell, brah, I know you come sharper than this. Your verse just lacked the necessary punches to secure this win. Concepts all there, but no connection really, imho. I did like the 'morning jo and coffee' joint. More of bars that like, bro. More wit. GL to both. Peace!
v/ JEM
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