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Originally Posted by For Battling

The Police’s Verse:


Ayo,

Police vs pussies? At least that was the match we were told
Fuck cash, we don't need bills to see bitches slide from a pole

Okay, kind of predictable with the poles concept I guess, could be way better

Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby
Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies

id have maybe done “when the smoke clears” but not terrible. hated the use of ‘bodies’ as it’s just overdone in text now to me

Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless
We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin'

i like it, ur best idea so far

Put ya team on life support, yeah our squad is meaner
Oxygen tank hooked up to ya face, it ain't standard procedure

felt the idea could have been utilised better than just ‘standard procedure’ at the end, better wording could have made more of it and added sting. it wasn’t horrid or anything, it just felt like it needed something more maybe?

National tragedy or not, see this team is too legit
We leavin' u & ya whole crew under rubble, this some 911 shit

Nah, too statementish for me tbh. I get the 911/ 9/11 thing but it’s not creative enough and didn’t have enough to it to hit

Ya shitty uniform sucks, as for us we can't get any flyer
Try us & we'll put the axe to ya back like it was proper attire

Again, simple concept really, could have been flipped better. Axe to ur back isn’t really anything. Not feeling

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