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King Karaoke · 12-03-2018, 01:04 AM

Hi...

Police vs pussies? At least that was the match we were told
Fuck cash, we don't need bills to see bitches slide from a pole
This was cool but couldve been worded so much better...
Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby
Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies
same thing as last line...
Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless
We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin'
Wasnt really a punch...
Put ya team on life support, yeah our squad is meaner
Oxygen tank hooked up to ya face, it ain't standard procedure
I liked this...
National tragedy or not, see this team is too legit
We leavin' u & ya whole crew under rubble, this some 911 shit
I didnt like how this was worded...
Ya shitty uniform sucks, as for us we can't get any flyer
Try us & we'll put the axe to ya back like it was proper attire
This was cool...

Overall your verse was cool but wording took the sting out of a few of your lines...

They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack.
Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black.
This was cool...
Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods.
I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods.
I liked this...
Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame.
I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame.
This was cool but rhyme scheme was somewhat simplistic...
Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition.
You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description.
This was nice...
You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub.
My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up.
this was good too...
Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making.
It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon.
This was ok...

I think FF was more consistent here...

Vote- FF...

Bye...

Vote- FF

12-03-2018, 01:04 AM	#11
King Karaoke Stackin' wins... Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,515 Battle Record: 61-20 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - Survivor Tournament - Netcees Battle League (6x) - Netcees Gimmick Tournament Rep Power: 10353694	Hi... Police vs pussies? At least that was the match we were told Fuck cash, we don't need bills to see bitches slide from a pole This was cool but couldve been worded so much better... Not for play, u can get sprayed, this shit is not a hobby Ironic when the smoke rise we'll be the ones walkin' out w/ bodies same thing as last line... Y'all need a call to leave the crib, fk that we clappin' ruthless We don't wait for fire to pop off...lil nigga we do the shootin' Wasnt really a punch... Put ya team on life support, yeah our squad is meaner Oxygen tank hooked up to ya face, it ain't standard procedure I liked this... National tragedy or not, see this team is too legit We leavin' u & ya whole crew under rubble, this some 911 shit I didnt like how this was worded... Ya shitty uniform sucks, as for us we can't get any flyer Try us & we'll put the axe to ya back like it was proper attire This was cool... Overall your verse was cool but wording took the sting out of a few of your lines... They call me and I’ll come spray everything. You on the other hand aren’t harming jack. Far from a killer, only time you shoot people is when they’re unarmed and black. This was cool... Always harassing the innocent, planting evidence and taking goods. I’ll dispatch you quick like disturbances in white neighborhoods. I liked this... Dudes stay stealing girls from you. You’re too lame. I’m not talking about my job requirements when I take out your new flame. This was cool but rhyme scheme was somewhat simplistic... Chicks like us more than you, there’s no competition. You’re alone every cuffing season yet it’s in your job description. This was nice... You have no chance of getting past me. You’re going against the best, scrub. My girls look like playboy bunnies, yours look like Hush playing dress up. this was good too... Your salary’s a joke. I wouldn’t risk my life for the amount you’re making. It’s funny that they call you the pigs yet you can’t bring home the bacon. This was ok... I think FF was more consistent here... Vote- FF... Bye... Vote- FF __________________ the Outsiders Orc \| ill nik-A \| Sn00p \| King Karaoke