Castro opener is ok I see the tie in in set up an sorta comical nice ice breaking start.
Next bar. Had all the ingredients felt it lacked execution. Sort of feel like you just need to move the pieces around here an it was good but as was it's an ok.
Next three were nah. South Korea line sand ya best bar thus far and a solid hit clever liked. Then we miss again from memory. Then you had that funk master flex stuff. I'm guessing there's an angle here but however you were going about it I didn't really get it. Feel you jumbled shit here an it had similar issues to that second bar. Except second bar was still a hit. Closer was lol and cool. I enjoyed that up there with South Korea as ya best bars.
My phone's dying an don't want to lose this so will edit an do the grand supreme leaders breakdown later.
Ok Kim
Opener was meh. Closer was meh. Everything inside that was solid. Consistent and the flow was lovely. Marxist was a clever wordplay and contextual tie in. Tbh everything even the opener and closer was very direct. Felt this is where the big lean comes in. Castro wasn't direct enough and Kim is just full of angles to attack hard on.
Vote Kim consistent n direct
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