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Originally Posted by For Battling
Venom’s Verse:
When we catch Peter...We'll put his face where the curb is
& THEN we will rip the legs off this Spider like a disturb kid
LOL cool I guess
It’s musssic to our ears when your skull & the ground crack
Fuck your corny theme song! We got Eminem on the soundtrack
okay
When Eddie Brock & Venom link up...you know we inspire
The last time you faced us, we made Tobey Maguire retire
it was okay but lacked any real sting to the punch for me, it’s just a statement with the way you have it there, it needed more
Your friendly in the neighborhood...while our record be vile
You let thugs get ‘money on your block’ like a Jeopardy tile
jeopardy lines been done. again, it’s okay, not really relevant enough to the character imo to get love either. you’ve such an easy character to attack angles wise and yet went with this for some reason? it’s odd to me
Everyone around him dies, plus his dead Uncle Ben crazy
So when we snap him back to reality...it’ll mick Gwen Stacy
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again it needed more, felt flat
I got the first guy winning. better attack lines, more creative, better wording and concepts