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Aesthetic - some breakdown for you
Get off of bags dick you 2 are flirtatious and sick!
Ill put your body in a crick with fingerprints and a blood sample.
This does not rhyme which is just the basic, its also not got a concept, its a statement and more in your face and for that to work it has to be laugh out loud funny or just brutally awesome an even then its rare people will give it props... Also a punch is like the insult/the sting/the hurt...there is no insult/sting or hurt here
Tell them it was suicide.
You cartooning social networking iconic fagot.
this didn't rhyme, the structure has totally changed, an all you did was call him a fagot like kids in the school yard
Patrick wants to be a star lol too bad ya girl is the fish.
Lookin like squidwards nose, STD on that bitch.
this could of been something actually, but you didn't do anything with it, you could of really done something good with a spongebob reference/concept. I don't even get where you were going with this so cant really direct
Slutty ass girlfriend ya aint even gon know about.
She just be like "girls night, im going out."
lol this is actually pretty funny but for the wrong reasons, it doesn't have no concept, I would suggest looking at the tutorial section
We both now filled wit doubt cause its definitely true.
Genital warts... damn homie, straight glad im not you.
Don't know if it was mentioned he had Genital warts, certainly the second time you have made an STD line so I shall assume this is something that has been mentioned and is an attempt at a personal in which case - this is still a statement
How did you not notice though, it's a CAVERN WITH POLKA DOTS!
Most like saw it, how could you ignore something that obvious.
this is a question..or a statement...but either way if I repeated how could you ignore something that obvious...would you be insulted hurt upset humiliated etc or would you just be like...whatever....cmon man not rocket science
Leave this cat delirious with a silly ass issue, sorry boss but I bet she wont miss you.
One line???
By the way,
Congrats on the herpes you should join the Somads.
or was this the second??? Well in that case that's like what 3 maybe 4 std comments?? man my 5 month year old son could hurt him more
No offence A your a good writer but when it comes to battling you leave a lot to be desired... I hope my comments shined some light on your verse and why Pat will take this comfortably.