U need Drugs if u think ur not bottom-tier, the field ur in is nothin but slow kids
Cuz if we're talking about DARE Class, it's filled w/ nothing but pre-teens who don't know shit
decent nameplay
U aint making it out the first round, Ima off this lame bastard
The only time we'll say 'Dare lived' is by spelling the 2nd half of his name backwards
should've removed 'by' in the second line... cool nameplay tho creativity is solid
Mathew Murdock a gangsta? Nah... Hoes are lost like who's he?
Only shortys claiming that 'Double M G' are some Maybach Music & Ross groupies
multi's are off which hurt the flow for me, like the concept tho on the double M play
U aint DC Standard so sit down, don't play - ya words are fraud n' so gay
This Marv'll come w/ more forced shit than an orc-ward & gauntlet wordplay
don't get this sorry
Ur suit is the whackest of them all, even ur tailor had trouble w/ seams on the vest
Cuz fat sluts doing cosplay is the only time ur w/ a bitch w/ Double D's on her Chest
lol, the whole double d nameplay / tit reference is very overdone but this was done well & is very applicable for a tourney like this so I dig it
Vs
Aiyyo
frankly u scared, whole family dyin’ left u sad with despair
now ur forced to live w/ this loss even longer than u had been with theirs
lol, dunno why but this comes across HARD imo.. good wording, strong open
mob blasted ‘em square infront of u, left the bodies ‘n then bounced
..the Costa agents served up three flat whites that left u frothin’ at the mouth.
I get the three flat whites in relation to his wife and kids layed out, but yeah sorry missing the rest of the connection here... search didn't help tbh
i got sonic superpowers, u’ve just a gun so big SMACK rappers be cursin’ crazy
the renegades M16 overshadowed his whole career wayyy worse than Jay-Zs
u've just a gun so big? reads weird, cool punch tho with the tie in to the Em verse and the character
first you Navy Seal then agent S.H.I.E.L.D? still gettin’ beat to a pulp
ur logos seen the result.. two black eyes & only 3 remaining teeth in ur skull
dope
miss me w/ ur bullshit, talkin’ grimey like ur lord almighty
..they said u’d been an ex-marine but Im the one leavin’ the Corps behind me..
nice finisher, good tie in the charcter played w/p aside , can be over-looked in this case
Cool battle and fun read. both were pretty solid throughout & had one bar I didn't quite completely wrap my head around ... I actually think this was pretty close, but I think the Punisher Logo line sealed the W for Dare Devil... in a close match that was creative & botb to me so I have DD edging it... props to both
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"I shit myself
I had to throw my underwear in the dumpster outback
Uve won"
-kungfugrip
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