This is my kind of writing here. Loved the verse Evis. You killed it with the combination of schemes and content. The only reference I didn't catch was 'Metu Neter' which I'll be looking up after I post since I really enjoyed the rest of the subject matter. Was digging the snake of knowledge reference. Only small thing that stood out as worth mentioned as far as critique is concerned, I felt the rhyme scheme could have changed a bit sooner somewhere in the middlish area. Don't feel like going back to reread to find exactly where cause I'm high and have no attention span. But yeah, good shit.
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