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Originally Posted by Adonis
Flow - Good god, that first bar.... I think "endure" is the word you were looking for....Sodden and rotten stench gets a thumbs up though...
A story about a...I think the word is "Simp?" - *confirmed in urban dictionary* who struggles with being the abused in a relationship. Sort of depressing, not only is this not my cup of tea, but you also had a few errors in wording as far as tense and grammar go, it made it less enjoyable honestly.
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Endeavour is the correct word.