[Adonis]

Lenox - I remeber this name for a long time ago, and I hope it is you, but I assume you meant "folklore?" Maybe you are new, though folk lord technically works, just not A+.

This story was a acid trip not really gone wrong, but gone right in the sense that I wouldn't expect anything less, right?

So he tripped balls and saw demons on subway or in street passing by. I enjoyed the paragraph format, and though it flowed in it's own way, you did not allow the rhyme scheme to dictate your stories path, you, instead, flowed when the opportunity arouse, otherwise, "stuck to the script" as it were. Solid context pertaining to topic, execution beyond that I rather enjoyed. Good read overall IMO.

Mr. Splif - FuKK man, that was actually good.

A story from Grimm Reapers perspective, where he is actually retelling the story of hell no?

I loved the ending, reaching that breaking point where we all give in, that's how it is supposed to end??? Wrong, that's how it will forever continue....But I see what you did with the short space, I wish you expand on shit man. This is honestly a good conecept that I could spend two days on and flesh a fucking gem out, but I too have an infatuation with creating...



v/ So while I enjoyed both as far as reading goes, I wish Jay expanded more and wished Lenox had more meat to it. In terms of lenox, I feel like he had a trip and story done, in terms of J, I feel he told more of a complete story given his rather profound ending of subtle toruture being how it is supposed to be. So while this is a tough vote.

I enjoiyed Mr. J in the slightest of margins