Lenox: The first bar was dope. The internal rhyming and just the way it came out is the scheme that I use personally. So I related to that. Your second bar was ok. I didn't like the fact you used "tactics sick and tactics slick". Tactics twice was a turn off. Other than that this is my type of fucking rhyme. The way the syllables flowed and how it wasn't off the grid so to speak and it related to the topic flow/swag I think you killed this to be honest. The flow and the swag was on point. I actually really liked this this verse. Dope drop.
Flow: Opening couple bars were good but the execution was a bit off. Tiny shit like adding a letter and losing a letter. The thyme/ pie bar was pretty good. After that I liked your creativeness but the flow tended to be a bit choppy. You had a good idea when it came to the swag part but I felt you took it more as a battle type thing. I think it might have hurt your flow a bit as well.. Still a decent verse tho.
MVGT: Lenox...His verse was just more crisp when it came to flow and swag. Flow showed up but I feel after his first bar it kinda slowed down. but I feel Lenox got him on this..nice battle tho props to both
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