I never voted on this type of battle so give me a break.
Pancake:The first 3 lines were really nice. But I think you added a syllable going by the rules of the Haiku. That missus Blasey ford line was pretty dope too. Relevant content and the wording was really on point considering Gunbar topic wise. this was fucking nice.
Inn: I was feeling the six feet deep bedsheets part. i also liked the scars burn memories line. I that that was pretty cool. The melting heat calibers saturate part was nice too.
My Vote: Pancake. It was close but I thought his Haiku was a little bit more creative than Innovators to be honest. But this was pretty cool to vote on. Next time I'll hop in on this type of battle
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