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Adonis · 10-08-2018, 02:26 AM

Cake: Shotty is two syllable you limey fuk. Solid couplet though. While it was fluid completely, you neither punched in a dissing sense, nor rhymed multiple layers. I see the college,trigger,liberal etc. concepts. good shit overall

V8R: All haikus fit criteria. Saludé. Fairly vivid and raw honestly. I like it. Felt like a flex/diss/spit in your face type shit.

While cake was more witty with it, Ino was more disrespectful in a sense, which I enjoyed.

v/inovator

10-08-2018, 02:26 AM	#9
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946449	Cake: Shotty is two syllable you limey fuk. Solid couplet though. While it was fluid completely, you neither punched in a dissing sense, nor rhymed multiple layers. I see the college,trigger,liberal etc. concepts. good shit overall V8R: All haikus fit criteria. Saludé. Fairly vivid and raw honestly. I like it. Felt like a flex/diss/spit in your face type shit. While cake was more witty with it, Ino was more disrespectful in a sense, which I enjoyed. v/inovator __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR Last edited by Adonis; 10-08-2018 at 02:33 AM.