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Adonis · 10-08-2018, 02:12 AM

Vic: First Haiku ends in 6, my last name martinez and "piñata" is 3 syllables. U-haul line was 'simple' syllable long.

Content: You strung together 3 haikus to actually flow cohesive. You had nearly a complete and linear stanza fluid. Good shit overall

JD: LOL. Bodied. I got nothing negative other than you gotta fukin accomp. with a 0 win record. cheers. burn on3

v/ J Dil

10-08-2018, 02:12 AM	#6
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	Vic: First Haiku ends in 6, my last name martinez and "piñata" is 3 syllables. U-haul line was 'simple' syllable long. Content: You strung together 3 haikus to actually flow cohesive. You had nearly a complete and linear stanza fluid. Good shit overall JD: LOL. Bodied. I got nothing negative other than you gotta fukin accomp. with a 0 win record. cheers. burn on3 v/ J Dil __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR