[Adonis]

Sharp: First haiku ends in 6 syl. to me.

just cause you put a coma, in the
middle of a sentence don't make
it haiku. What's unfeeling?





Knock: First 'ku is the best of this battle.

Craft day was a shitty rhyme other than a few nice cuplets.


Honestly....I had hoped you guys strung the 3 haiku's into 6 bars or so and punch with some swag and flow type shit....aint that why you signed in here? With that said, Knuck had the better 3

v/Khead