Quote:
Originally Posted by PancakeBrah
The shotty liberal.
Long winded when it's triggered
a college student
This was cool
Student of the game
It'll take advantage quick
Aiming head down will
Aight not seeing big gun bar influence on this one
create an assault
Mix your upstairs with downstairs
Missus Blasey Ford
Cool
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Innovator
Pull triggers heavy
The lead weighs them down with ease
6 feet bedsheets, sleep.
Cool
Put rounds to yah head
Riddle shots to your conscience
Scars burned memories
I dig this
Bullets stck to bone
The calibers saturate:
A soul melting heat.
Cool
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I'm leaning more Innovator on this one
All three of his were more relevant to the topic imo while still being creative
If Pancake had a couple more like his 1st haiku it would've been a lil closer of a battle
2nd was cool & 3rd was dope just didn't have much to do w/ guns
Also I was gonna say your first line in your first haiku was 6 syllables but I can see how it would go both ways when it's said